BOY - Mrs. Prachett's Revenge by Roald Dahl

When the 5 boys were going to school, they saw that the sweet-shop was closed. So they took a look in the shop and saw that the gobstopper was everywhere and a dead mouse on the floor. Thwaites said, "Mrs. Prachett might be dead by a heart-attack!" Dahl thought 'I am a muderer?' Suddenly, they heard the school bell ringing so they went to school. Mr. Coombes said to line up outside against the wall. Mrs. Prachett came out of the school with Mr. Coombes. Mrs. Prachett started to check students. "Too big. Still too big. Still too big," said Mrs. Prachett. So she skipped some students. She got to Thwaites. She said, "It's 'im! 'E is one of them." Then, pointed at Dahl and the other 3 boys. They went into the headmaster's room. The headmaster hit the 5 children at the same place really hard.

I think that kind of punishment is very bad because by hitting the students, they won't do it when they are in the Catherdral school, but if they move school, they will do it again. I think that children should be first punished my talking and if he keeps doing it, hit him. 

Roald Dahl used many similies and interesting language to make the autobiography engaging. For example, Thwaites yelled, "Ow-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w!" and straightened up like elastic and My mind was swimming and my eyes had gone all blurry as I went forward to bend over.

Diary of a Wimpy Kid Dog Days by Jeff Kinney

This story is about a boy called Greg and this book is a diary. Now I will tell you what he did in his summer Holiday (June) 
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For him, a summer holiday is basically a three month guilt trip. Just because the weather is nice every adults say, "You have to go outside and play sports." but  Greg's favourite summer holiday is staying in his house playing video games on TV with lights off and curtains closed. His mom thinks completely different from Greg's summer vacation. She thinks every children need to go outside and get some sunlight. Greg goes to his best friend Rowley's house pool. One day, they invited a new girl who just moved into Greg's neighborhood. But she met a lifeguard and forgot all about the guys who invited her there.

Boy- Chapter 2 Kindergarden 1922-1923 by Roald Dahl

In 1920, his own eldest sister died from appendicitis. She was 7 years old when she died. Olivia, his eldest daughter died at the same age as his eldest sister. Olivia died from measles. Also, his father died by pneumonia. He could have fought with pneumonia, but didn't want to live without his favourite daughter. His mother did not wanted to go back to Norway even if her family wanted to help her. She chose to follow her dead husbands favor. His favor was to educate the children in English because he thought English was the best. Dahl started school when he was 6 years old. The school was called Elmtree House. He used to go to school by tricycle.

Language Art Assesment

10-06-2011

Language Art Assesment

By Whattheheck Spiderman Chikipachipa

    This is a story about a really good dad and his son. Dad keeps his promises everytime. Dad has 2 faults. One of them is he can’t stand flies. If he sees one, he chases it until it is squished. He never, ever, forever uses the fly spray because it makes crazy stuffs in the air. His 2nd fault is the table manner. One day, his company boss came to his house to eat dinner, and his wife said “ Don’t say a single word to our son while dinner” and dad said “ okay”. So the son tried to make dad break his promise. He eats noisy but his dad doesn’t say anything. So he prepared a fly swatter and he put it on the table. Dad says nothing. He drops one dead fly in his dinner. What will happen to dad? What will he do?

   

    I liked the part telling his son to have food manners. ‘Don’t talk with food in your mouth’.

    I also liked the beginning. ‘Dad runs around the house with a fly swatter in his hand’.

    I think I won’t recommend this story because children who reads this story, I think they will try to copy it.

The Sword Thief-The 39 Clues by Peter Lerangis

I only read 2 pages so I have nothing to tell you now. SORRY!!!!!!!!!